Crown of Crows
A living world with real languages, real cultures, and a queen who was sent home.
Most fantasy names are decoration. A writer wants something that sounds elvish or old or sinister, reaches for some apostrophes and hard consonants, and moves on. I can’t do that. Ever since I first read Tolkien’s Ring poem, and realized that ash must mean “one” and nazg “ring,” I’ve been called to untangle the names and find the patterns and meanings behind the sounds and feelings. As a computational linguist who teaches machines to hear human speech, I build the languages of my worlds with real linguistic machinery: the aesthetic balance of sound and meaning, with histories that leave marks, and with logic that makes a word inevitable rather than invented.
Andowan, the world of Crown of Crows, has two well-developed languages so far: Artanga, descended from Modern Irish, and Pizan, grown from creolized Spanish with English pressing in at the edges. Every name in the book is built from them, plus a few snatches of Dragon speech and even stranger things. Andowan is an animist world, a mindful world. Below is a map of Artír and a sample glossary of its words and names, with notes so you can see some of the bones in the broth.
Some of the bones in the broth
Artír is a kingdom of talking animals, and they speak Artanga — descended from Irish across two thousand years of sound-change, learned from the world’s first king. Each word below carries its pronunciation, its meaning, and the older word it grew from.
One word, two grammars
Artanga marks whether a creature has learned to speak. Same word — bradann, salmon — two worlds apart:
The queen who was sent home
In 1951, Sarah Patrick is no longer a child. She no longer yearns to return to the fantasy land that gave her refuge, gave her purpose, made her a hero, crowned her queen… and then cast her out, exiling her back to the war in England. No, she is an adult, dealing with the grief of losing her family, making her way in the adult world. She even has a fiancé.
But the nightmares will not stop. And when she is approached by an honest-to-god witch in London, one who has managed to reopen the gate to Artír, she must decide whether to return and save the land that rejected her.
Crown of Crows is a portal fantasy for everyone who noticed that Susan Pevensie was left behind. It asks what happens when the girl who was told she was too old for wonder is the only one who can save it. Sarah, exiled, orphaned, and grown, is asked to be a hero one more time by the world that pushed her away.
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